Great graphic design, and use of colour! I know it's written as just a one-page game, but I want more. Specifically, it would be great to have additional prompts around why you are seeking the Goblin. That would help drive the rest of the narrative structure. Just constructive feedback - love it overall!
Thanks for the feedback! I have a lot more experience with graphic design than game design.
I actually do have a vague plan to expand this into a proper zine with additional tables, example goblins and more art. Your comment is good motivation. Stay tuned!
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Flawless aesthetic & design
Certainly not flawless but thanks for the kind feedback!
Great graphic design, and use of colour! I know it's written as just a one-page game, but I want more. Specifically, it would be great to have additional prompts around why you are seeking the Goblin. That would help drive the rest of the narrative structure. Just constructive feedback - love it overall!
Thanks for the feedback! I have a lot more experience with graphic design than game design.
I actually do have a vague plan to expand this into a proper zine with additional tables, example goblins and more art. Your comment is good motivation. Stay tuned!
Awesome - happy to help, if you want someone to give feedback down the line.